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you are my horizon
endless, beautiful.
existence,
so close in my reach,
always getting away.
our love is strong,
what doves strive for,
why the moon smiles.
summer becomes winter
and Time kisses
Nature's cheek.
even frigid, you make
me warm with blush.
you make me me,
you make you you,
you create all
things, thoughts.
all Time is eternal
in your eyes.
i yearn for the day
we finally meet in
all your Perfection.
so close,
disappearing,
nonexistent,
gone.
endless, beautiful.
existence,
so close in my reach,
always getting away.
our love is strong,
what doves strive for,
why the moon smiles.
summer becomes winter
and Time kisses
Nature's cheek.
even frigid, you make
me warm with blush.
you make me me,
you make you you,
you create all
things, thoughts.
all Time is eternal
in your eyes.
i yearn for the day
we finally meet in
all your Perfection.
so close,
disappearing,
nonexistent,
gone.
This poem is about existence. I was told I was too vague, and so I put it right in there, third line. "Existence, I love you!" or whatever it says. Then I was told I was still too vague. What?
Oh well. I was also called a romantic. Well, that is the poetry that inspired me to write poetry.
It's fine.
So this poem is about existence and the reason being is because I don't know if I exist anymore. It's an interesting problem. Discussion?
Oh well. I was also called a romantic. Well, that is the poetry that inspired me to write poetry.
It's fine.
So this poem is about existence and the reason being is because I don't know if I exist anymore. It's an interesting problem. Discussion?
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I got that it was about existence. 
Well written ~ I like it.
Well written ~ I like it.